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  • EdgarAllanPoetry

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    This is absolutely amazing. I would have to say it's one of my favorites by you. I love the sadisic twist you put on a usually harmless rhyme. This poem is very deep and it's very relatable to my life. Great piece!
    August 15th, 2011 at 06:07am
  • EndlosenRegen

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    This is amazing. Do you have a tune to go with it? I love it so much.
    August 13th, 2011 at 03:48am
  • pronetobeingalone

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    I absolutely loved this. you left me speechless. its as good as my favourite song which has amazing lyrics, deep and meaningful just like this poem. I think its more of a song though because of the repetition of liar liar, arms on fire.... stanza. i especialle enjoyed the bit with 'i have forgotten how to trust'', it was really beautifully put, great rhyming there and so honest and raw. I feel the emotion in this piece. Bravo, well done and I hope you keep writing because you have a talent in this as a profession. I'd definetely read a book you write (:
    August 12th, 2011 at 02:05am
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