I like how different this one is - it shows how attuned you are to different styles. I like to experiment with different writing styles and I appreciate when a writer doesn't stick to just one style. Bravo.
I liked the major idea of this poem, but I can't say that I liked the formatting of it very much. It just seems to simple for what you were able to create in the other poems. The way you described the idea of change, and how people always try to avoid it or stop it from happening, and how it just makes things even worse in the end was done very well. I liked a lot of the individual lines, just not the over all format.