Gore in the deal. - Comments

It was hard for me to pick up the beat to the poem, but the words were powerful nonetheless.
(:

I forgot to comment this yesterday. :cheese:
[i]As she's dripping from the pool of blood, her undiscovered youth went to waste.[/i]
It's my favorite line. There's something mesmerisingly perfect about it.
Actually, I say that about the whole poem, Susmita, because it's brill. :file:

It's beautiful. D:

:cheese:

Dude, I can safely say,
in terms of pwnsomeness, in my books, you iz higher than Dujo himself.

Just :cheese:

-state of awe-
That was... amazing..