Slowly Falling to the Pits of Hell - Comments

Ah, this reminds me of the work of Larry Eigner, who's famous for his one word per line poetry. Spare poetry, or so its called. Nicely done. Each word is more encompassing than the last, vivid, yet dark and foreboding in nature. Excellent work.

I like this because with the whole one word-per-line makes you stop and think about it. And then the last line shows what they all add up to.