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  • Nagi

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    Absolutely stunning! I love how the beginning and last line of each verse rhyme..it flows very well!

    Sad and touching ending...keep up the good work!!
    August 27th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • Dots

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    Wow that was really sad and really emotional. You really portrayed alot with this. Was a real cool poem :)
    August 24th, 2011 at 04:15pm
  • DesmondTiny

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    This is really deep and awesome!!!! Keep up the great writing!!!
    August 22nd, 2011 at 01:35pm
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