Lacrimosa - Comments

I absolutely love the style that this poem was written in. Not many poems that I read are in this style, so I smiled when I read this poem.

This was such a beautiful poem. Every line flowed so well, which I completely loved. I think my favorite part of the poem would have to be the first three lines. They are just so powerful, and so full of emotion.

But overall, this poem was amazing. I don’t know what else to say other than it left me reading it multiple times, and leaving me loving it even more. Wonderful job!

This actually has a flow to it despite the uneven sentence pattern. It actually adds to it, and makes me keep with the beat.
I'm not a big fan of acrostic poems because they usually just aren't that good. But this one is. I also like the word you used. It's very pretty,

I love this poem.

This is not your average acrostic poem. It is far more ingenious because it flows while most other acrostic poems do not. I like it very much. Frumos.

I like this, it's clever and emotional, which can never be complained about. On S, "so does my tears" would be correct as "so do my tears."