Weave me a Blanket out of Clouds - Comments

  • The Colour of Music

    The Colour of Music (110)

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    I really liked this. I like the way it uses light and dark, warm and cold.
    The descriptives are perfect and I can tell you put quite some time into this poem.
    ^_^
    September 24th, 2011 at 02:12am
  • Painter's Dream

    Painter's Dream (200)

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    I really do like this poem; it's has nice flow and is descriptive.

    [i]It shall line my grave
    Stained with blood
    And torn with tears[/i]

    Those three lines had a good impact on me; definitely my favorite out of the whole poem though it was all great (:
    September 4th, 2011 at 06:26pm