September 24th, 2011 at 02:12am
I really do like this poem; it's has nice flow and is descriptive.
[i]It shall line my grave
Stained with blood
And torn with tears[/i]
Those three lines had a good impact on me; definitely my favorite out of the whole poem though it was all great (:
The descriptives are perfect and I can tell you put quite some time into this poem.
^_^