Only in my head. - Comments

  • BeccaBoo21

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    wow i really love this poem it's kind of dark but at the same time not i like that about it. keep writing!
    March 22nd, 2008 at 03:25pm
  • eeeee

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    That was good but I didn't really undertsand what it was about untill it got to the bit about cutting her legs. I don't really see how the beginning fits in, but its good all the same.
    March 11th, 2008 at 11:07am
  • AndieBear

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    wow...
    March 9th, 2008 at 01:42am
  • a_damaged_soul

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    WOW, That is so amazing, like wow, If I could only be as good as you. You are a great writer.
    Wuvz,
    Damaged
    March 8th, 2008 at 06:36am
  • RememberMonday

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    OMG! LUVE this...
    March 8th, 2008 at 04:15am
  • XlostXsoulX

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    Amazing poem. Very touching. :)
    March 8th, 2008 at 01:53am