I am loving this. I read above this is a song? Well part two/a second song? Its really beyond amazing. It fits the story and idea well, and the flow is absolutely beautiful! : )
August 31st, 2011 at 01:07pm
Wow I loved reading this. I kind of love everything to do with Alice in Wonderland and especially this! Okay so, my favourite part:
'Rag dolls left alone the children have forgot
Our Guardian stands above and slowly rots'
I'm gunna read the rest of your poems so when you get lots of comments remind yourself that I'm not a stalker :D