Pain is Beauty - Comments

repitition* i think thats how you spell it!

i like the repition you used at the end of each stanza. a great topic to write about. i never thought about makeup and trying to be beautiful through the ways of our culture and how it can be a negative impact and that it doesnt really matter. thank you for showing me that perspective!

Wow. This is so beautiful. It reminds me of the message I try to get across in a lot of my poems. Keep writing. :)

Haha, I'm kind of stalking your poems right now.

Wow. Definitely truth. Beautiful poem.

I meant We're chasing perfect. Thank you for your feeback and for making me notice my typo. It means a lot to me. Thank you! (:

There are a few rhymes in there that don't sound as good as the rest, but you always picked it back up with the flow and repetitiveness. And I know good sounding rhymes are hard to come by when perfectly balancing a poem.
Quite a good example of this world, I like it. It has a lot of good meaning to it.

I really love the ending, especially about eyes the color of rain, but did you mean to put,

[i]"Were chasing perfection"[/i] or "We're chasing perfection"? Might just be a typo, but either way; lovely poem, great imagery. Good job =)

I love this <33