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D.I.Z
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I bet there's a wonderful/sad story behind all this...
But just as a piece of advice, try to make the rhyme between different words, so that it sounds a lot better, don't repeat the same rhyme word so much...
September 3rd, 2011 at 09:39pm
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But just as a piece of advice, try to make the rhyme between different words, so that it sounds a lot better, don't repeat the same rhyme word so much...