Wow, this is really good. It's so dark, but I love dark poetry. I love how the first stanza and the last stanza both start with "hello" and the repetition of "choke me" is really effective - it gives the poem a sort of angry, desperate feeling. This poem has so many emotions, and it sounds so deep and so genuine. I really like it! :D
June 19th, 2012 at 05:31pm