A Devils Place - Comments

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Wow you are an amazing writer

I love your lyrics im in love with all of them, i write some lyrics myself but there not a nearly as good as urs!!!!!!!!!!!!

i think this is honestly amazing. i almost cried. "life ran short, life ran away." it's so powerful, and each time you repeated it after the stanzas, it seemed to mean so much more. i love it.

omg i luv it!!! it amazin!!

You're writings are very quasi-morbid. Very good, but they'd be better done through another topic. Your topic is the medium through which your talent will travel. You're an awesome writer, but you need to write like a realist, not a pessimist (or even a cynic!), sometimes.