If The Sun Goes Down - Comments

I like this and how it flows , it may not rhyme at times but its the quality of the poem that i like :))) keep going !

suzy :))))))) omg chiar ca ai dreptate... si totusi traducerea in caz ca cineva trece pe aici everybody pay attention to me so what I said to her: Suzy :))) (that`s a name LOL) omg you`re right... I`ll translate it, maybe someone will see it :P nothing you can worry about :D she said my poem`s really good :)

hai ca eu iti zic in romana:)) foarte tare;) nice:X