Bleeding - Comments

Emo-Cindy (100)

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I understand that feeling very well. This poem is good

March 16th, 2008 at 12:02am

a_damaged_soul (100)

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I like it, its has some feelings in there that I feel everyday.
Great poems. You should check mine out, they kinda have the same point in it.
-Damaged-

March 11th, 2008 at 05:56am

ChemAttraction (100)

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I think the last paragraph you can take out. It doesn't fit. But the rhyming, and the rest of the poem is wonderful. Replace the word dead with death, in some places. And make sure to go over it and fix the errors. Otherwise it is wonderful! Keep writing. And make sure to comment on 1 of my poems, please!

March 10th, 2008 at 04:38pm