Well, I really like it. AND I'm blond. So yeah. It's a really good poem, and of course not ALL blonds are like that, but a lot of 'bottle blonds' are. And it shouldn't offend anyone. It wasn't written FOR anyone on here. It wasn't aimed at you. And no, improper grammar doesn't help prove higher intelligence but it's very often used in poems to get true emotions across. You did a very good job and you should never apologize for writing what you feel. That's my only criticism. Is you apologized for writing your feelings out.
October 1st, 2011 at 01:04am