Meeting with Phobos - Comments

I really love this poem. Like Inamorta Blurr said, the dark undertone is truly amazing. I really like the 'storyline' as well, walking into a tavern and having the man asking their worst fears. I really love the 'good and evil' line. I know this is cheesy, but it kind of reminded me of that poem by Dr. Seuss called 'Oh the places you'll go' which has a line something like 'and you'll play lonely games to/ one's you can't win cause you'll play against you.' Anyway, the whole thing is really amazing, and flowed perfectly. Great job!

I like the theme and the subdued dark tone. I wonder what inspired you to write this, hm? :)

But I especially love the tenth and eleventh stanza,and the two lines (separate) "Good and Evil fighting through/not knowing what side is best for you" and "Being a profanity"
The latter more than anything else, though. I think maybe it rings true for me somehow. Maybe one of my darkest fears? :p
Anyway, I like!