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  • Jessii Tara;

    Jessii Tara; (100)

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    This is good to although I think your writing style shines more with lyrics, this was quite catchy and the rhyming works well. Very good job with this as well.
    November 12th, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • AddyJade

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    This poem flows well, but I'm not a fan of poems that have obvious rhyme. Also, because of how short each verse is I felt like I had to rush reading it. But I think that you've written a very nice poem:)
    November 12th, 2011 at 11:53pm