Generation Grey - Comments

This is so different that it's great. I mean, you can probably rap to this. I love it. I like things that are different, you know. It's not all "Roses are red...etc.." It's...amazing. It's sad, but true. This was the world has come to. <--- Wow - that rhymed. I do that. Good job, dude. Keep writing.

This poem reminds me of my day.
I like it.

Oh, man. This was just depressing. Well-written and wonderful but depressing..
The rhythm was a lot different in this but still as good as your other poems.
Your word usage was definitely clever and well chosen.

This is so dark and sinister.
And I love dark and sinister poetry.
Awesome poem! <3

This is so depressing, makes me want to lose faith. But good poem.