i like it, almost as much as i love that exotic feeling ;) but really, you did a beautiful job describing a simple thing. i love the personification and the line "it hits in cool waves" is interesting. just because, for me, if i'm correct in what i think it is, it makes me warm lol. nice poem though :)
but really, you did a beautiful job describing a simple thing. i love the personification and the line "it hits in cool waves" is interesting. just because, for me, if i'm correct in what i think it is, it makes me warm lol. nice poem though :)