I Just Called To Say Goodbye - Comments

This is what i'm thinking sometimes. I don't think it needs to be "more poetic" like others say by the way; its amazing.

I really enjoyed reading this and seeing all the different questions you asked. The way your worded things was quite well done. I did pick up on one typo in the middle where hatred should be *hated.
I did quite enjoy this poem but I feel that it could have been more poetic. Whether that means you have to change the entire thing or separate it out into stanzas, I don't know. This is actually the opposite advice of what I gave another contestant.
i like where you went with this but if it could be changed while retaining what you have already written, I think this could become a truly inspired poem.

+ 5 points

I LOVE this! It almost made me want to cry! I wish people can realize life can be better. :D I hope you aren't think of suicide. Sorry for me asking. x3 I'm not sure if you were just writting this out of TRUE emotion or fun. Once again, this is a true written poem. :)