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  • lou.

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    This is really mean but really good. My only suggestion is to fix the grammar errors like You're instead of Your in the titles and instead of writing ur, u, ect to use the proper words. :) lastly, in the phrase "you never was" it should be "you never were".
    Keep writing! You're great!
    December 8th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • the_photographer

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    wow yea i see i couple of your tht should be you're but hey when you write in anger you dont notice things like tht lol. nd hey its not mean they deserve it. too bad they prolly wont see this tho.
    November 30th, 2011 at 05:19am
  • D187824

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    oh and soory but this is a Mibba requirement when titling stuff so i need to point it out- the title is SUPPOSED to be

    [b]You're[/b] All Talk
    November 30th, 2011 at 03:19am
  • D187824

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    a bit mean dontcha think?
    November 22nd, 2011 at 05:20am
  • Black Rose'97

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    Really good, I think I may have commented on all of your poems :)
    October 15th, 2011 at 12:09am
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