Cornerstone - Comments

This is lovely. And I have my doubts many times! I love it :)

Oh my gosh this was exactly how I was its like growing up they say you have to believe this and this because its right but then when your grown up you want to know more and if this and this are true so this poem is so freakin AWESOME :) truly amazing

First off, this is a fantastic poem. You've captured the controversy of this subject, having faith or a belief in a religion and having faith in science. I found this poem extremely enlightening and relateable, which can be a difficult combination to achieve. You really rose p to the challenge of this prompt and made it your own and made something wonderful. A job well done :D
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30

I can't believe how amazing your poetry is. Many people can relate to this, myself included. I love how, to me, It sounds as if you are being slightly cynical, yet you're taking on points that are very serious and a topic that is grand and yet sensitive. I personally would word a few things differently, but that just just a very minor thing. All and all, it has to be one of the best poems on mibba. It beats reading a poem about a suicidal emo, that's for sure!

You have definitly captured a war that often goes onn between my head and my soul in this poem <3 Truely inspiring.

Controversial, but did I mention, F***ING AMAZING!! :D