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  • likely lads

    likely lads (100)

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    The rhyme scheme was great, an improvement than some other rhyming methods I've seen you use.
    This is my favorite.
    Keep up the good work.
    May 27th, 2007 at 06:10am
  • waitingforsomething

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    You [i]should[/i] be proud, that rhyme scheme must have taken a lot of thought! Great job, I really like this one. MCR would be proud XD Keep up the good work!
    May 26th, 2007 at 03:37am
  • swollen.and.small

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    its beautiful u should be proud!!!
    May 17th, 2007 at 04:00pm
  • Halii

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    IT'S GORGEOUS
    May 3rd, 2007 at 01:14am
  • I love pancakes

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    WOW that was on the best poems on this sight. I love the My Chemical Romance twist. You SHOULD be proud of this poem. If I were you I'd send it to MCR just to see if its unique enough for one of them to mail you back!!
    May 3rd, 2007 at 01:09am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    I love it!
    April 26th, 2007 at 02:18am
  • xX_I_WaNt_YoU_Xx

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    Awesomme poem cindy i write poems but there nt good enough for this
    March 26th, 2007 at 07:27pm
  • rock_ur_self

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    It's wonderful. I love it.

    I can't write poems very well...

    But your poem is very well written, I like the concept. :)
    March 20th, 2007 at 01:38am
  • colour me stupid

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    tis very good!!
    March 20th, 2007 at 12:29am
  • BloodyBallerina

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    i like it too! *nods*
    March 20th, 2007 at 12:26am
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