The Patient - Comments

The rhyme scheme was great, an improvement than some other rhyming methods I've seen you use.
This is my favorite.
Keep up the good work.

You [i]should[/i] be proud, that rhyme scheme must have taken a lot of thought! Great job, I really like this one. MCR would be proud XD Keep up the good work!

its beautiful u should be proud!!!

IT'S GORGEOUS

WOW that was on the best poems on this sight. I love the My Chemical Romance twist. You SHOULD be proud of this poem. If I were you I'd send it to MCR just to see if its unique enough for one of them to mail you back!!

I love it!

Awesomme poem cindy i write poems but there nt good enough for this

It's wonderful. I love it.

I can't write poems very well...

But your poem is very well written, I like the concept. :)

tis very good!!

i like it too! *nods*