Jealousy - Comments

  • VeiledInsanity

    VeiledInsanity (150)

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    I actually really enjoyed this poem, you describe jealousy in an original yet understandable way. I like how you reused the word green throughout the poem, normally using a word so much takes away from a piece of literature yet this time I found it added to it. A great poem that matches the prompt very well :) Great job!

    + 5 points
    October 22nd, 2011 at 08:02pm