I really liked it, though it is a sad poem. Though most people who make a poem underneath a prompt like this make sad poems. I find it ironic that what most people see and would say that you interact with the world is very different fro the reality as they cannot see inside of you. This is truly an amazing, inspiring and beautiful poem. Great job, it's the perfect way to end this contest.
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30