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  • BReal

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    I actually, am not that big of a fan of this poem because I didn't use good structure.
    November 17th, 2011 at 08:54pm
  • BReal

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    I'm so glad that you liked it.
    November 17th, 2011 at 08:54pm
  • Monster!

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    I loved this. It perfectly reflects the confusion and the pain. Reminds me of my past...
    November 17th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • TheBrokenPrincess

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    I like it.
    I like certain parts.
    It does sort of make me think of Chris. A used to be best friend.
    November 15th, 2011 at 10:13pm
  • Ijustmadeyoulose

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    Please don't take offense to that. I'm just not a fan of repetition. c;
    November 15th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • Ijustmadeyoulose

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    It's kinda repetitive... :3
    November 15th, 2011 at 09:50pm
  • BReal

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    RosesAreDead, I'm so happy that you liked it!
    November 15th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • BReal

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    I try to go from different points of view so thanks for noticing it! It means alot!
    November 15th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • RosesAreDead

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    WOW this took MY breathe away.
    Awesome <3
    November 15th, 2011 at 03:14am
  • FluffeeWrites

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    I love this! :) I loved how you went back in forth there. Kind of like a story/narration type thing
    November 14th, 2011 at 11:48pm
  • BReal

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    emolove177, I'm so sorry. But thanks for reading! scarlett's_letter, I'm going to make more poems. It's kinda my specialty
    November 14th, 2011 at 10:00pm
  • Crimson_Catastrophe

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    And again you did not disappoint.

    keep at it!
    November 14th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • Autumn177

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    Amazing. This is how i feel about a girl i know. (: But unfortunately shes gone now. :(
    November 9th, 2011 at 12:25am
  • CrimsonBlood7004

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    This is really good! :)
    November 8th, 2011 at 11:15pm
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