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the lover.
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The stanzas aren't meant to fit :) The first two stanzas are meant to be unnatural and awkward, unlike the last one which is simpler, like the impulse to run.
December 18th, 2008 at 01:39pm
God Dammit!
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I love the idea, though I think it still needs some work.
The stanzas don't seem to fit, and the first stanza it worded oddly.
December 15th, 2008 at 12:51am
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I liked it a lot. Very, very good.
=D
Christina
March 15th, 2008 at 04:47pm
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