Shelf Ware - Comments

I find content in the way you love
Watching down with glee
From the red hot stars above
And yearning to be with me

This really stood out for me. It was poetic and sweet and...just well written. The poem overall was really nice. Good job.

I agree with everyone else, basically. :) <3

<3 amazing! I love this poem so much! ur so talented :)

This is amazing! I love how you repeated the lines. Have you thought about making this into a song??

Wow! This poem is....so good. I can't even tell you you did one little thing wrong or anything, it's just that good:) I liked the rhythm, the flow, the word choice..it was likes song with out the music. And the line about just being friends and then about being more than friends, I can so totally relate to that:)
Once again, great poem!

You told me "But if you only look at one other, let it be "Shelf Ware," as that is definitely, in my opinion, my best work." I have to admit this is one of the best poems I have ever read. I want to say it's like a song but it's so much deeper and better than that. If you read my journal "11-11-11" this sounds almost like its made for it. :3

wow this is great! i love how you go from being afriad to read the letter to gathering the curage to read it..i love this poem you have great talent from what i see so far. :)

Wonderful poem.

Wow.
This completely and totally blew my mind. Seriously. This was extremely awesome. I love it. The last six stanza were my favorite....I don't know why though. They just popped out at me.
Wonderful poem.
~Reena

awesome!! i do like this, good good job, thankyou for commenting on mine too (and of course I wrote it lol) :)

I really like this, and it is Blink-182esque.
I love the rhythm and rhyme.
I would love to hear this as a song :D

Great work~

amazing ...