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  • lpducky

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    Maybe (just a thought) in the last lines, instead of 'silly little slut' try getting creative with synonmes for that
    November 16th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • BReal

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    Good job! Can you comment, subscribe, and give me advice on how to write better on my poems and stories? I would really apprecciate it!
    November 14th, 2011 at 09:39pm
  • sexyemoprincess69

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    ouch, whose that directed to??? wouldnt want to be her
    November 13th, 2011 at 11:22pm
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