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  • BReal

    BReal (100)

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    Good job! Can you comment, subscribe, and give me advice on how to write better on my poems and stories? I would really apprecciate it!
    November 14th, 2011 at 09:38pm
  • Lawliet08

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    Awesome
    Clearly the emotion is there
    and the rhyming couplets are decent.
    Overall noice!
    November 14th, 2011 at 01:37pm
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