Amazing, this shows your writing talent completely. The title suits this poem so well, all about lies and deception. I like how you went full circle with it and added the beginning to the end, it really added to the poem and created a powerful image. i also can't get over how well this piece of writing flows, I read it so well because the flow helped guide me along. Great job!
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 30/30