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  • id_die_for_you

    id_die_for_you (100)

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    its real. i cried when i heard me and y exs song. for pete sake.
    November 22nd, 2011 at 01:31am
  • Hero Troll''''''''''

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    This is honestly crap. You have a lot of work that needs to be done with this. It's too typical, too cheesy, and just unreal. It doesn't feel real at all. It seems like plastic. Your poem seems like plastic. Fix it.
    November 20th, 2011 at 09:15pm
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