I really like this, it shows how great your poetry skills are. It's a fantastic poem. I only have a word of warning that doesn't affect your score at all. Try not to get caught up in this structure and format. I think it's really great and not all authors can do it, however, try to add some variation so that your work doesn't start to blend together. Not that that has happened yet. I do like this XD
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 4/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 29/30
This is great! Descriptive language, nice structure, and nice rhyming. I wish I could write descriptive language. Can you comment and give me advice on my poems and stories?
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 4/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Total: 29/30