The Optimist - Comments

This was incredible. I really love your word choice and the rhythm. And I love how dark it is. I've always liked darker poems more that happier ones. And the way you wrote this is just beautiful. (And I'm sorry I didn't comment on this yesterday like I said I would)

Wow! With the title, I wasn't quite expecting the rest of this poem. But I loved it! It was so dark and mysterious. The words threaded together perfectly, and I love the format. I don't think I have ever read anything like it. Great job!

Thank you! And I commented on 'Shelf Ware'. :3

Yup, I think that is a better title. Much better. Still a bloody awesome poem!

This is really dark, and straight to the core, if you know what I mean. The Cynic is most, if not all the time, the Realist though. I would love it if you could read some of my poems, preferably my newest one, and "Shelf Ware." I would be very grateful.