Oh, I love this. It's so sweet and it manages to make the reader feel emotion with just a few lines. I kind of like how you put the lines in the centre; it seems like the poem suits it more that way. I like how the first line is about the scenery and then how it connects with "atmosphere" in the second line. I also love the simplicity of the last line.
I don't think there is anything I would suggest you change in this poem. It's beautiful, and it deserves more comments!
I don't think there is anything I would suggest you change in this poem. It's beautiful, and it deserves more comments!