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  • Xit's.your.faultX

    Xit's.your.faultX (150)

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    I agree with confused, the profanity might put a lot of people off. Well written though. I like it.
    November 22nd, 2011 at 11:11am
  • The jester's mistres

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    a piece of advise: loose the profanity. its greaat for a personal poem, but not for something your trying to impress college professers with. other wise, i really like it.
    November 22nd, 2011 at 07:25am
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