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  • forever_forgotten

    forever_forgotten (100)

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    I was trying to figure out how to puncuate it and I couldnt quite figure out how I dont know putting a whole buch pd periods just dosnt seem right
    November 23rd, 2011 at 02:16am
  • g r i m

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    Beautiful :) needs punctuation though. but it's beautiful, the way you expressed emotion was amazing.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 02:05am
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