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  • Senior Donkey

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    This is awesome great job! I love it keep up the good work and stuff :D
    December 27th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • theburningbush

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    this is really really good! i hope you're feeling well :)
    November 23rd, 2011 at 07:46am
  • Lady Jessa

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    Excellent job! (:
    November 23rd, 2011 at 06:43am
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    This is great I like it :D
    November 23rd, 2011 at 05:57am
  • XTheXDevilsXAngelX

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    All of the rhyming made it feel forced. It's amazing! But if it was a free-verse or narrative and a rawer tone, would made it feel even more amzing.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 05:51am
  • Those Who Favor Fire

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    This is amazing :O
    November 23rd, 2011 at 05:02am
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