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  • Lil'Biskette

    Lil'Biskette (150)

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    Plz Comment... I need critisism :)
    December 15th, 2011 at 01:25am
  • Rapunzel Rapunzel

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    I could imagine it so clearly, the image, and the story. wonderful writing.
    December 7th, 2011 at 01:51am
  • apple1997419

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    It sounds like it's a dead body talking. Very nice message.
    December 7th, 2011 at 01:48am
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