Dear Liar - Comments

  • Halloweenlover

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    @ YourHersheyKiss

    Awesome!!! It's very good! :D
    January 6th, 2013 at 08:04am
  • Mary-Alice White

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    @ Halloweenlover
    Lol This one I wrote for some contest. It was interesting.
    January 6th, 2013 at 08:03am
  • Halloweenlover

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    Amazing! I love these parts: "I love you with all my heart, but I was only in your shopping cart."

    "I only want love. Not what you wove."

    Apparently the last thing entailed the guy weaving together lies! Such horrible lies that broke the poor girl's heart! I love your words! :)
    January 6th, 2013 at 08:01am
  • Mary-Alice White

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    I'm super happy! This poem is getting published!!! :D
    January 7th, 2012 at 03:29am
  • LivingMyNightmare

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    Great Poem :)
    December 7th, 2011 at 04:51am