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  • cherry kisses.

    cherry kisses. (100)

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    This is a really gorgeous poem, my love :)
    May 24th, 2012 at 09:49am
  • Lil'Biskette

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    I really admire the way you ryhme the words to tell it's story but the way they are said makes it a good narrative. I like it!!!! write more!
    December 7th, 2011 at 11:45pm
  • A Polite Delight

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    I really like how you've paced it, the short verses drawing emphasis and keeping the reader hooked - a rough draft? damn good one then
    December 7th, 2011 at 10:37pm
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