I like this. the tone and word choice is very concise; very clear cut. same thing with the way it's done with every line being a seperate sentence. it creates a mood that goes real well with the subject. also the repetition is really good; it kinda brings it all together, makes it seem more... this might be the wrong word, but more compact. i kinda associate that feeling of "compact-ness" with the idea of death in general, so i really liked that. all in all a brilliant poem.
December 15th, 2011 at 10:58pm
