Ugh, I can relate a lot* to this. :\ Great poem though..<3
December 25th, 2011 at 11:22pm
You & Your New Girl - Comments
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i cane definitely relate 100% keep writing this is really good.December 20th, 2011 at 01:13am
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Sometimes it's hard when the other has moved on and you've not. I like how you've caught the questions one might think and the edges of emotions within your write. Plus, good imagery with the girl with the phone and the photos.December 17th, 2011 at 08:20pm
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nice. i can feel the loss. i can see the picture of a crying girl watching her phone in my head. wonderfull powerfull writting. thank you!December 17th, 2011 at 07:55am
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This is reaaallly good! I can relate to it so well, it feels real and fresh in my mind! This is really good.December 16th, 2011 at 11:57pm
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I like this one too! It has a lot of meaning.December 15th, 2011 at 12:45am
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Im curious... are you a mind reader??? i swear when i read this that is exactly what had happened to me like just today....thats....wow. i love itDecember 12th, 2011 at 09:05pm
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loveeee it!December 12th, 2011 at 03:01pm
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This is amazing! I love it!December 12th, 2011 at 03:55am
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THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ!!!!! You are so talented! There was so many emotional and powerful words in that poem and you really did a wonderful job of showing all of the thoughts and emotions people actually go through! This is sooooo good! :) I love it!December 12th, 2011 at 02:45am
