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  • chemical daze.

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    I love it! It's so simple and beautiful. You should definitely enter it in the contest. c:
    March 16th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • Bella Goes Away.

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    How is it that you can write poetry when I can't?! >_>
    But seriously though, beautifully written.
    December 28th, 2011 at 06:58am
  • Fantasy Monroe

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    Wow. That was really good. I love the line [i]Millions of worlds lay at our fingertips[/i] thats really good.

    Its short but I still like it. I think this is one of my favs :)
    December 18th, 2011 at 04:27am
  • Emrys

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    as a star gazer this makes so much sence. i live out in the country, well by the coast, and you can see the stars for miles. always orion. he's my favorite. thats what this brought to mind. well, not at first. when i read this i saw what you had described, and its cool. well written. again, Thank you!
    December 15th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • owltype

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    I love this poem because I'm in it. ♥

    No but seriously, I really do love this poem. It's very sweet and it makes me nostalgic.
    December 14th, 2011 at 08:57pm