I really like this :) I believe everyone's been to that low point, and finally just get fed up and move on. But you captured it in such an inspiring way.
Great job! I love the line right around "Breaking free." It just made me smile. It sounds more hopeful and like you can finally just breathe more easily again.
This poem is very well written, I will it a lot. The slight mention of self harm just makes this most interesting, its something most people wouldn't notice. I like this.
this is exactly how i felt when my ex broke up with me!! i wrote a song saying how happy i was and how i was so glad he was out of my life. excelent work!! well done. well written and well said!!