This Poem is AMAZING :)
December 28th, 2011 at 07:27am
I Can Pretend - Comments
-
-
I seriously love this poem...So much emotion...:)December 27th, 2011 at 12:02am
-
its kinda sad but i like it a lot!!! really :DDecember 26th, 2011 at 09:16pm
-
Love it!!December 25th, 2011 at 09:37pm
-
This is SOOO gooodd (:December 22nd, 2011 at 10:59pm
-
This is really awesome! The emotion put in it is amazing!December 22nd, 2011 at 04:37am
-
This is my all time favorite!!!! It is so beautiful and...WOW!!! Great job! :)December 21st, 2011 at 10:47pm
-
OMJ I really love this! You're actually a really good writer! x) At the beginning when it says "It took a while" I think you should change it to "It took me a while",, it just flows better in my head ;P Anyways,, I could be wrong,, whatever you like :)December 20th, 2011 at 01:38am
-
:'( this is also really good.December 19th, 2011 at 04:24pm
-
"Pretend" seemed to be the theme, and it flowed nicely through out. I personally liked it, and it stayed true to the emotions conveyed. Missing someone after the relationship has fallen apart isn't easy. Sometimes it takes a little pretending until you can mean those smiles and laughter again. Nice job!December 19th, 2011 at 02:47pm
-
AHHHH I love it!, lol I can sooo relateDecember 19th, 2011 at 05:44am
-
The stronger the emotions, the stronger the words, the stronger the words, the more beautiful a poem. This couldn't be more true than right here. Love it. <3December 19th, 2011 at 05:37am
-
This is great! It's really deep and emotional. I like it!December 19th, 2011 at 05:02am
-
This is absolutely AMAZING!!! I love it!December 19th, 2011 at 04:30am
-
wow. so well done!!! i love the sadness of it. i love the flow, the rhythem, everything. job well done!!December 19th, 2011 at 04:03am
-
LOVE IT!! kinda sadDecember 19th, 2011 at 03:37am
-
This is really good, made me cry a little .... Very good!December 19th, 2011 at 03:33am
