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musikfan (400)

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aw, i love this. i agree, the necklace metaphor is the best part <3 I haven't forgotten you bestie

December 26th, 2011 at 04:17am

chameleon (100)

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Adorable, yet deep. My favorite line is the one abou the necklace. It's hopeful among the rest and really proves the point of the poem

December 21st, 2011 at 05:16am

imperfectivy (100)

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These are my favorite stanzas
"I'm alone in my room
under the covers; Forgotten.

Forgotten by him.
Forgotten by them."

Good job. :] It's original but can be applied to many.

December 21st, 2011 at 05:10am

Vineirys (100)

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So sweet. So sad. It has that cute, childlike innocence but it also has that sting.

December 21st, 2011 at 05:06am