I adore the metaphor with this!
February 25th, 2012 at 05:25pm
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Love it. Like others, my favorite part is: I gave you my heaven and you put me through hell.January 5th, 2012 at 05:09am
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Very flowing and smooth, your word choice without fail. Well done.December 30th, 2011 at 08:47pm
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"I gave you my heaven/And you put me through hell"
I loved that line. c: and also the rest! <3December 30th, 2011 at 08:28pm -
i love thisssss.December 30th, 2011 at 01:39am
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This was really, really good! I loved the wording(:December 26th, 2011 at 10:45am
